Wednesday, 10 December 2008

Sign shot.

Could really use some feedback on this shot please. Only the body and the front legs are done im just about to make a start on the back legs.

2 comments:

Sarah said...

its looking really gd matt....you've definatly got the hang on the 4 legged walk cycle. Just be careful on that first bit where hes walking round the lampost...its possibly cutting it a bit close with the legs...little adjusting needed. Other than that its looking great!

Dan Grigsby said...

Some of the walk works well, but in places it jumps a bit. In the first half of the first second as the spider turns round the corner of the lamp it seems quite a mechanical turn, try to smooth that. Also in the last second slow the spider sprints, so slow that down to fit in with the rest of the movement.

As for the movement of the camera (which isn't most important) I think the speed could be slowed down a notch and when we come to the end of the shot, don't stop the camera let it still move but allow the spider to overtake and go past it.